Friday, January 4, 2013
Essay
Dear Sam,
How your days are at United Kingdom? My daily life was putting my life on the line, if I do not manage my time, I will never able the finish my homework on time. Well let talk about your assignment that you needed help with. It is about write a life person’s story and you want me to you recall our fun days together so that you can complete the assignment. Well I am glad to help my twin brother but it may not as complete as you wanted.
In our childhood days, we were always cause trouble for our parents and get scolded afterwards, but the sad thing is because of your “Baby Face” I was always the one got scolded. One of the troubles that we cause is by causing a fight to start because one of our classmates takes my plastic bottle that can be recycles. At that time, we did not know that the plastic bottle can be easily replace and my mind set to love the bottle and try to get it back. At the time our parents got the news, I got scolded because I started a fight because of a plastic bottle. I think at that time, my mind is always on the recycle side so I wanted to take the plastic bottle back to recycle it.
I just remember another one, this one is a fun memory, in our per-school days, and we have a day that we get to play water. When the water is filling up, we were all ready to jump in when the water is filled. As this is the last period, we will go back when our parents come. One by one, our classmates’ parents are coming to bring them home. At last, when our mother come, we only realize that we are the last one to go back home. Well we have no time to angry about it because we were already exhausted from playing the water all day. We just get ourselves change and sleep in the car.
In our primary school, do you remember our first year class teacher that teaches us Chinese? I forgot a bit about the case that I was scolded and caned by her and I was spinning around on the floor and it was like a circle. I think that is why I always play prank with the girls every year. If that did not cause it then I don’t know what did it. Maybe my mind is always like that and I just follow it. When we were at our third year, our Malay languages teacher that I like the girl sit beside me, I really did that and follow her almost everywhere when school end for the whole half year. This may also be the cause of the pranks that I played with the girls. I never think of this before because the cause just does not pop out easily.
Well I forgot most of our days at our primary school but I do remember that we played “Ice and Fire” with our friends for every recess and it was fun. Do you remember that one time you were “Ice” and I was “Fire”, we almost run the whole school because I could not touch you? Also remember for sometimes because we don’t want to go down to the canteen and was chase by perfect and our brave class monitor leaded us to the back of the library to hide. It was fun and we only go back down when class going to started because the library is at the fourth floor and our class is at the second floor.
Well I think I will stop here as it is already this late and I haven’t done any of my homework. I will continue again next time bye for now and stay healthy, do not let our parents worry about you.
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Teacher, the essay needed how many words? This one is at least 600 word.
ReplyDelete350 only but feel free to write more. I'd like it better if you spend your time to edit and put up a better post
ReplyDelete* How your days are at United Kingdom? (How are your days in the United Kingdom?)
ReplyDelete* My daily life was putting my life on the line,(My daily workload is putting my life on the line)
* I will never(be) able the (to) finish my homework on time
* Well (,) let('s) talk about your
* It is about write a life person’s story (writing a person's life story) and you want me to (help)you
* we were always cause (causing) trouble for our parents and get(getting)scolded
* but the sad thing is (,) because of your “Baby Face” I was always the one (who) got scolded
* one of our classmates takes (took) my (recyclable)plastic bottle ((that can be recycles))
* that the plastic bottle can be easily replace(d) and my mind (was)set to love the bottle and (to)try to get it back
* I think at that time, my mind is (was)always on (recycling) ((the recycle side)) so I wanted to take the plastic bottle back to recycle it.
* I just remember another one this one is a fun memory, in our per-school days, and we have a day that we get to play water. (I've just remembered a fun memory of our pre-school days where we get to play with water)
***I'm editing up to here. Can you edit the rest? If you're not too sure try getting Lulu or Brandon to help you.